Book Review: The Swan Thieves by Elizabeth Kostova

2010 at 11am     Posted by Rebecca Schinsky

Published January 12, 2010 by Little, Brown

I had high hopes for The Swan Thieves.  I enjoyed The Historian, Kostova’s debut novel, quite a bit, but it was sluggish toward the middle, and the ending felt rushed, and I wound up wondering why, exactly, the book needed to be as long as it was.  But it was a solid debut, and I attributed many of the perceived weaknesses to typical first novel growing pains….and I hoped Kostova would learn from them (and that her editor would be a bit more heavy-handed with the red pencil) the second time around.

I’m sorry to say that’s not quite the case, but The Swan Thieves is an improvement.

In The Swan Thieves, psychiatrist Andrew Marlow takes on an intriguing patient, a painter who has been arrested for attempting to stab a painting at the National Gallery in Washington, D.C.  The patient, Robert Oliver, does not speak to Marlow except to give him permission to talk to whomever he needs to talk to in order to find out what pushed Oliver over the edge.  Oliver’s refusal to speak is only one of his eccentricities, as Marlow soon notices him painting the same woman over and over, obsessively reading a bundle of old letters, and retreating further and further into himself.

A painter and great appreciator of art himself, Marlow is determined to solve two mysteries: who is this woman Oliver can’t stop painting, and what drove him to attack a treasured work of art? How are the two related?

In his search for the answers, Marlow interviews Oliver’s ex-wife Kate who provides the novel’s second narrative voice. Then Oliver allows Marlow to read the bundle of letters, which turn out to be an exchange between a nineteenth-century artist named Beatrice de Clerval (an invention of Kostova’s) and her husband’s uncle Olivier Vignot. As in The Historian, these letters play a large role in creating atmosphere for the story and providing clues to the modern-day mystery, and they become the third narrative line. When Marlow tracks down Mary, one of Oliver’s former lovers, he finally begins to unlock some of the man’s secrets, and because Mary writes Marlow a series of letters explaining her history with Oliver, she becomes the fourth narrator of this fascinating story

These deftly woven lines of narration were, for me, the highlight of The Swan Thieves. Kostova uses the format beautifully, allowing her characters to learn things they could only learn from each other, and this makes the mystery feel richer and more compelling. Because Oliver will not speak, Marlow (and we, the readers) are forced to take his ex-wife and former lover at their word and to allow them to fill in the missing details we need to understand the complex and confusing man. But, of course, Oliver’s ex-wife and former lover could have their own motives, so while they’re not exactly unreliable narrators, one does have to wonder how much they can be trusted.

The other highlight of The Swan Thieves is Kostova’s well-researched, richly evocative discussion of art and the artistic process. Through Beatrice de Clerval’s epistolary exchange with Olivier Vignot and Kate and Mary’s recounting of the obsession they witnessed in Robert Oliver, Kostova creates a full and enchanting portrait of a man consumed and driven mad by his passion. The book is chock full of interesting (if not entirely necessary) bits of art history and gorgeous European scenery and atmosphere, which enable readers to imagine themselves right into the characters’ experiences.

Really, the majority of The Swan Thieves is quite lovely, and I was rather taken with it in the beginning. In fact, for the first couple hundred pages, I was well on my way to making this a five star read. But then I started having reader’s deja vu. The book becomes sluggish toward the middle, and, again, the ending feels rushed. Kostova spends about 540 pages unfolding the mysteries at the heart of this story and then wraps it all up in the last twenty pages, and it just felt all too neat and tidy (and more than a little predictable) for me.

I want to love Elizabeth Kostova for her beautiful prose and carefully researched, fully realized settings and her skillful use of multiple narrators and narrative formats, but all of the warm and fuzzy feelings I have for her in the beginning are diluted by my frustration with the unnecessary length of her books and their rather unsatisfying endings. Because really, I’m not afraid of big books, but if you want me to read 561 pages, you better make it worth it, and The Swan Thieves falls just short. This was a reading experience made enjoyable by wonderful writing and a psychological mystery but weakened by poor pacing.

I will probably continue to read Kostova, but I will also continue to hope for a tighter story and better editing. 3.5 out of 5.

Hey, FTC: I received an ARC of this book from the publisher.